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your student no.)
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your student no.)
Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
[embed your proto-portfolios here]
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below[.])| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words) | ES-01; I have a lot of hobbies!! | 2008.04.16 | 280 | 5 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| Movie review 08.05.04 (300 words) | MR-01; I love Donkey!! | 2008.05.07 | 531 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 | |
| University life 08.05.18 | ES-02; What is "Rakuendai"!? ~My university life~ | 2008.05.17 | 401 | 6 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| Another review 08.06.01 | MR-02; I recommeeeeeend watching "Les Miserables" | 2008.06.02 | 902 | 4 | 0 | 2 | 0 | |
| Language learning history 08.06.15 | ES-03; I speak 4 languages!? | 2008.06.11 | 521 | 0 | 1 | 0 | 0 | |
| 5th essay (pending) TBA | ||||||||
| Totals | --- | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded
M: number of other media embedded
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.***I selectedES-04; I speak 4 languages!?as my best essay this semester. One of the reson is that it contains many paragraghs with 5 or more than sentenses. in short, It's easy to read, I think. Another reason is that the contents is organized better than other posts. Thta's all.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | "Best Reviews 1.5 (2008): Most Visually Appealing" | 2008.06.04 | 15wards | nomination |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | TOEFL and Happy Birth Day | 2008.07.08 | 52wards | Willing plan of traveling and studing |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | "Worries..." | 2008.06.22 | 41wards | encouragement |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments*[*] |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | ES-03&MR-02; I recommeeeeeend watching "Les Miserables" | 2008.06.02 | 39wards | Thanks |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2008.06.03 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | The Last Southern All Stars | 2008.07.11 | 28wards | Blessing and request |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2008.07.12 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 42wards | Promise to enjoy the live and to tell the feeling |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not? - ... Yes, it does. My blog displayed recent comments in a sidebar.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- As I commented more frquently on my friends' blogs, I got into a habit of checking their blogs.
- As I received more comments, I have loved blogging. And I was mentally helped by the comments.
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 1-01 | BR-01; I love teacher Morrie Schwarz | 08.05.15 | 648wards | 0 |
| 1-02 | BR-2; Biffer is the strongest!! | 08.07.02 | 563wards | 0 |
| 1-03 | BR-03; Saving Tigers | 2008.07.05 | 364wards | 1 |
| 1-04 | BR-03; A new place to live | 2008.07.12 | 456wards | 0 |
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Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- My best book review is "" The reasons why that I feel the sentences are the easiest to read and this review is more summed up than any my book review. Next, I like this book best. Therefore, I could smoothly write this review.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog have an archive? | o | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | o | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | o | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | o | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | o | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| o | ||
| o | |
| o | |
| o | ||
| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | o | |
| --- | --- |
about me (46) drawing (13) Typing HW (10) reviews (9) feeling (7) introduction (7) books (4) animations (3) music(jp) (2) world news (1) | --- | --- |
| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | o | |
| o | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | o | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | o | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...[Content]: First, I wanted my friends to know my character and my way to think, then I often wrote about my hobbies, my favorites, my motto etc. Although I wrote them, I didn't want to make this blog a self-satisfaction, so I took in greeting, askng, and request agreement for my blog visiter. (Therfore, this blog is named "Dialogue Diary")
- ...[Layout]: I love drawing!! And I wanted my friend to pleasurably read my blog, so I often pasted my drawings and picturs. Besides, I made them connect with each posts content.
- ...[Formatting]: I made letters that are important words or sentences bigger and colorful.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- I learned again that "継続は力なり", that mean "To continue is improvement." from blog writing. I have knew that to continue is really difficult above all else, but at first I couldn't keep blogging easily. However after I got into the habit of blogging, I gained faster speed of typing and learned how to casually express on writing. Besides, I knew my friends recent conditions easily. It's really good thing.
6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- I suggrest to links on sidebar as many as you can. For example, G-mail, Writing studio blog, Typing homework, ALC etc. They will be helpful in your blogging.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
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